Room for Improvement
Decent animation, meh art, way too short. I didn't like the theme at all - too overdone. Just because its your first animation doesn't mean we go easy on you. Just think of the rating as room for improvement.
Yeah, this wasn't so good (actually I am surprised that it has 6.00 in average).
I like the personality you created for the girl. Good job.
Not entertaining in the least. This is something left best forgotten... unless you're really bored.
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